Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Travelling in the UK



The London Bridge, Buckingham Palace, the Parlament House are some of the most famous attraction in London. But there is a lot of details that makes of this city one of the most attractive of the world.
I had been in Cambridge just for nine days, and I'm staying for six months. My first travelling out of the city was London by the day. A big city, and a lot of people, and high antiques buildings. If when I have seen the city on movies I loved it, now that I visited I loved it more.
I went with some friends, and one of them was our personal touristic guide. It was great, because without him I definitely would lost.
In a couples of week I'm coming back to London to see my parents for two days and I hope not get lost so I can show them the city.
Now I'm planning go to Paris with a friend I made at the school, and go to Italy for the Easter to visit my best friend, who studies film.
 I think travelling is the best investment, so I work for a year to have the enough money to travel and been in all the places that I can, and when I finished my classes I have two months to have itchy feet. The countries I want to be the most are Greece, Morocco, Croatia and Turkey.


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  1. Sarah19 March 2013 at 22:40

    Thank you for your posting. Some comments;

    The London Bridge, Buckingham Palace, the Parlament House
    *all these carry no article

    But there is a lot of details
    *countable - so its 'are'

    had been in Cambridge just for nine days,
    *for just

    and high antiques buildings
    *definition of antique:

    'A collectible object such as a piece of furniture or work of art that has a high value because of its considerable age.'
    ... so you can just say 'old'

    If when I have seen the city on movies I loved it, now that I visited I loved it more.

    personal touristic guide.
    *tourist not touristic

    without him I definitely would lost.
    *would be lost

    In a couples of week
    *weeks

    I hope not get lost so I can show them the city.
    *I hope to not get lost

    Good English:
    ...with a friend I made at the school, and go to Italy for the Easter to visit my best friend, who studies film.

    Now I'm planning go to Paris
    *planning to go to Paris

    ..so I work for a year to have the enough money to travel and been in all the places that I can..
    *no 'the' for enough money
    *to travel and be in all the places

    ... when I finished my classes I have two months to have itchy feet. The countries I want to be the most are Greece, Morocco, Croatia and Turkey.
    *look again at your tenses. When are you talking about?
    *do you want to 'be' a country?

    Thank you.

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