Dear students/travellers/teachers/multicellular organisms
Hello again!
Today I would like to tell you about one of the bests ways (if it's not the best) for going to London.
Hello again!
Today I would like to tell you about one of the bests ways (if it's not the best) for going to London.
First of all. Let's clarify how it's the thing, and let me tell you that London is not the type of place in which you can see and experience all his majesty JUST in a few days.
Just now I can make a huge list of places to go in London, BUT as you know. London, as a huge capital city, is very expensive.
So you will neither have money nor time to visit all these places.
SO, now I will have to select just a few places?
Yes, maybe.
But, NOT with this:
With this you will be able to visit as many London' attractions as you like, paying little money in comparison the money you will spend going to the same attracionts without London pass.
With the London pass you can go to more than 60 attractions FREE!
Look how it works:
Once you’ve bought a London Pass you don’t have to pay to get into any of the attractions it covers. Simply show your card at the entrance or ticket office of any attraction included on the London Pass, and you will be allowed entry. THAT EASY!
You will also be able to buy a travel card with the London pass. (with the Travel card you will access to Buses, Trams, Over-ground Trains and the famous London Underground or ‘tube’for free)
Make a comparison and look how much you will save, believe me, it's very cheap and easy!
Enjoy your travel!
See you in another life.
DSGC


Hello, thank you for this post and good luck with your studies post Eurocentres Mr D!
ReplyDeleteSome feedback:
First of all. Let's clarify how it's the thing, and let me tell you that London is not the type of place in which you can see and experience all his majesty JUST in a few days.
*all its majesty
Just now I can make a huge list of places to go in London, BUT as you know. London, as a huge capital city, is very expensive.
*I wouldn't say 'just now' that is for spoken English. Rather; 'Right now I could make a huge list...'
*Careful of your punctuation
*it is very expensive
So you will neither have money nor time to visit all these places.
*you will neither have the money or the time
....paying little money in comparison the money you will spend going to the same attracionts without London pass.
*in comparison to the money
spelling of attractions
*the London pass
THAT EASY!
*its that easy
Nice sentence:
(with the Travel card you will access to Buses, Trams, Over-ground Trains and the famous London Underground or ‘tube’for free)
*you will get access
Great!