Have you ever been to any castle? If you never seen castles with your own eyes, you should go.
On the last Saturday, I went to Leeds Castle. I had heard this castle had been chosen as the loveliest castle in the world, so I was really looking to see it. You may want to ask me how it was, indeed. It was amazing. Very lovely!!!
The first thing that surprised me is a peacock. There was a peacock in the garden of the castle, naturally. He can peck you because he was not hitched. Then I saw the castle! It was very beautiful. The garden and the castle were like the place which appears in fairy tales. It was small, but very clean. Furniture and decoration were splendid. An Easter event is going to be held. It will be nice.
I would like to visit there again, in summer.
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*any castles?
If you have never seen castles with your own eyes, you should go.
*if you have never seen a castle
*you should go and see one
On the last Saturday
*Last Saturday
I was really looking to see it.
*I was really looking forward to seeing it
The first thing that surprised me is a peacock.
*was the peacock
There was a peacock in the garden of the castle, naturally.
*walking without around freely (not naturally)
He can peck you because he was not hitched
*check your tense
Furniture and decoration were splendid.
*need article - the